Samantha
92
Sunshine Walk S(123456)
Mobile:
91234567
Email:
email@address.com
30
January 2013
Mr
Jonathan Tan
Section
Manager
Engineering
Operations
XYZ
Company
10
Fairfield Drive S(456782)
Dear
Mr Tan,
Application
for position of Process & Equipment Shift Engineer
XYZ
Company is one of the world’s leading semiconductor companies and has recently
been listed under Thomson Reuters Top 100 Most Innovative Organizations. I am
keen to start my career in this global organization as a Process & Equipment
Shift Engineer.
As
a final year undergraduate from the Engineering Science Programme specializing
in nanotechnology from National University of Singapore (NUS), I have
undertaken modules, such as Semiconductor Technology, which I believe would maximize
my potential in this position. For my final year project, I am working on titanium dioxide (TiO2), where I am required to change its properties. This
has helped me to gain a deeper understanding about the properties of
semiconductors.
Furthermore,
over my course of study, I have been involved in three design projects. These
projects have honed by team building skills after working with different team
mates for each individual project. I have also learnt to adapt to the different
working styles of each member, to communicate and work together effectively to
achieve our project objectives. I believe this skill is crucial as a process
& equipment shift engineer, as I will be required to work closely with my
team, and to be able to communicate effectively with the members on the
subsequent shift.
In
addition, I have been actively involved in several student organizations. I am
currently the captain for the squash (female) team in X Hall, and has designed
and led the team in weekly trainings, which eventually led us to securing a
gold in the Inter-Hall Games 2013. I was also the chairperson of the X Hall
Orientation Committee that organized a camp for 250 freshmen, where I planned,
executed and oversaw the entire process of the event.
Thank
you for your time to review my application. I enclosed my resume for your
consideration. I look forward to a face-to-face interview with you to discuss
my suitability for this position. I can be contacted at 91234567 or email@address.com
at your convenience.
Yours
sincerely,
Samantha
Hi Samantha!
ReplyDeleteI like your application letter as you use good english and you highlight specifically how your course of study and modules tie in with the company's specialization.
However, one thing that can be improved would be the paragraph in which you mention your leadership positions in your hall. it could be better if you mention how these positions have shaped you or helped you grow in your leadership skills, and how it will be relevant to what the company needs.
otherwise, i think this letter is pretty well-crafted. :) congratulations on getting a gold, and all the best for your job search!
Thanks Baowen for your comments and congratulatory message! (:
DeleteHi Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a generally well crafted letter. It is easy to follow and well organised. What stood out for me was the 3rd paragraph where you skillfully linked your experience gained in managing the three projects to the job requirements.
However, one factor that could help your letter stand out from the rest could be elaborating on why you are keen to start your career as a Process & Equipment Shift Engineer. That might give you the edge over others. Also, just a minor language issue.
>I enclosed my resume for your consideration. ~ I have enclosed...
Nevertheless, I think your letter does successfully show the reader the qualities that you want to exhibit.
Dwayne
Hi Dwayne, thanks for your comments! You're right, I should state a reason for applying for this position instead of other roles. (:
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